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Hi Evi :) First of all, thank you for your review, I have taken some of what you suggested and have adjusted this piece accordingly. :) You have not yet ...

There are actually a few grammatical and spelling errors throughout this XD

G'day Mars. First, thank you for bringing the incorrect gramma to my attention. I can't stand it either. I've made the changes that you pointed out, because I felt they ...

Hey nixonblitzen, Cheers for your input. I've made the adjustments that you have suggested, except for one. I have the commas in place, because they are there for you to ...

Night after lonely night. I stare at the flickering lights Of my computer screen. My mind drifts into hollow places Dark, secluded, fond memories Of this days past. I hit ...

Wow. Beautiful. Stunning. You really captured the intensity of the emotion this person has for their love. The formation, the way it flows together from start to finish. I don't ...

Interesting. I'm laughing actually. It had quite a twist that I was not expecting... Aliens? Anyway, good job. It ended quite abruptly, I must say, which was a bit of ...

I like this because it is simple and straight to the point. Just something I've always liked in everything. You portray a lot of emotion in it, which allows the ...

Hey Angie, Cheers for the star, and for taking the time in reading this! :) After I had written this piece, I trying to decide on whether to format it, ...

As I stand and watch the tears Bleed from your eyes, I cannot help but smile. The way your eyes are shining, And tears streaming down your face, Makes me ...

I also must make mention of your selfishness in not reviewing other peoples work, which they have spent much time and effort in creating. With all that aside, for what ...

G'day. My name's Aaron, but most call me Stoney, so feel free to call me whichever. I mostly write poetical things that have no rhyme to them, or song lyrics ...